I'm alone again,
As you see.
I was with company,
but they had to leave.
I know they won't return,
They never do.
I'll just have to wait
For the next fool,
Who thinks they can help,
Until the realize,
I'm already over the edge.
What do you think, be harsh
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AHHHHHHHH!I read all tour poems and its strange to think that all the top poets on here are sepposed to be really good at poems, but i find them average.This is poetry my friend..i think i love your work so much because your a teenager and i can relate to it alot. You writevery personal and about life.
i got an idea here:
you wrote:
I'll just have to wait
For the next fool,
Who thinks they can help,
Until the realize,
I'm already over the edge.
But what about:
I'll just have to wait
For the next fool.
They think they can help,
Until they realize,
Im already over the edge.
i just added commas and fullstops
March 25, 2008
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