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I'm me

I'm trying to be myself,
And who you want me to be.
But the two don't mix.
You like who I'm not,
And hate who I am.
You try to change me,
To be your better half.
I begin to turnaway,
Just to be free
Yet you abandon me,
for being me,
Is that fair?

What do you think, be harsh

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  • emma1703
    March 24, 2008

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    Aww..so sad Ive felt like that before. its terrible that ppl try to change you..u wrote the poem very well.
    I also love the form of writing and the language

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.