moon girl fell in love
with a boy who could make her laugh
smile and giggle all in a look
that boy shot her a grin
and her heart thudded against her chest
she wondered if he could hear it
the day she realized she more than liked him
she stepped outside
and tilted her head to the night sky
the moon stared back down at her
and she whispered her only wish,
'let him love me back'
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Author notes
I am moon girl. And my story is still unwritten, however the poem's finished.
justcallmeMOON[♥]xoxo
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Comments
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This is simple and cute, but I really liked it a lot. There was a sense of innocence and hope in it, but I think it is an innocence and hope we can all feel at any age, or at least recall with fondness. Nice job on this cool little gem. It proves things do not have to be monstrous works of linguistic prowess to have real power and feeling. I love it. A very, very nice poem.
language: 4, rhythm: 5, subject: 4, tone: 5, form: 5.
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