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I Am...




I am a tulip sitting in the rain

singing,

smiling,

and loving every drop




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  • skyviewexpress
    February 11, 2009

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    After I got your reply and read this again, I must say, It's the kind of poem that would put a smile on anyone's face and make their day, as it has mine. If I can out smart the computer, as well as this site, I'm going to add it to my favorite. And give you another applause. Loved it.

    -Kitten

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

  • skyviewexpress
    February 9, 2009
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    This is so adorable. Good write.