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You've Jacked My Heart

you've jacked my heart,
can i have it back?
you've had it 8 months,
and it's really overdue.

you've jacked my heart,
but i don't want it on loan,
you've kind of hogged it awhile,
would you mind to share?

you've jacked my heart,
so hand it over, please.
you've kind of maimed it,
and i need it repaired.

i jacked my heart,
it's currently under repair,
i won't let you have it back...
but it's open for another guy to jack.

Author notes

If you read my poem Self-Inflicted Pain, this is still about Ben. Same as another one of mine, called You. Kind of sad, really. But I think it's kinda cute.

I don't expect good input, this was just a rare happy poem and I think there is so much to do to make it better. But I like it this way.

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