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Ye Olde Chain Mail

Enclosed thou shall find within
Armour of burnished chain mail
Ye charmed suit of toledo steel
Shallst grant yee fortune in battle
Only should thee and straightway
Convey thy mail to a confidante
Thence to four of thine stalwarts
With this parchment, oh be wary
Lest luck not desert thee knight
Shouldst this chain be breached
Peradventure what befall thee
Daemons gnoring thy very vitals

(return by squire to my castle portcullis if not delivered)

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  • dave ochs gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    hey frank

    pretty funny converting the idiotic practice of the chain letter into olde english, seems like ye have a good grasp of Shakespear.
    dave


  • skipeople
    May 31, 2008

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    Haha, nice!!!! This is just totally awesome and amusing. It flows well, makes you laugh, and I can tell you had fun with this one!

    Good one,
    Ashley

    • Frank E Gibbard
      June 5, 2008
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      Thanks Skipeople

      Ashley - cheers for the comment. Thanks for seeing the joke. Frank