You can't sleep all night anymore
Nightmares to remember what you've done
Dream seduced by feverous fantasies
The blood sea leads to a river of insanity
Judgment day is not today
Bonfires to guide ships to bay
It's been so long since that time
Still you hold all wounds inside
Like an angel in the dust
Exposing your wings to the rust
You deny that there is still life
Waiting for god to wake up
Judgment day is not today
Bonfires to guide ships to bay
It's been so long since that time
Still you hold all wounds inside
Come to take me away
To lead me astray
Trough star full skies
Though you say you're happy inside
no lie can be told by the eye
Like an angel in the dust
Exposing your wings to the rust
You deny that there is still life
Waiting for god to wake up
Rusting wings
Will make you fall one day
This is a song about some weird stuff in my life...
Reviews
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I like it
It's a nice song, great lyrics I think. The feel reminds me of Evanescene for some really odd reason that I can't figure out. . .
Anywho, I like the first verse and chorus the most. Is this all? I mean like most songs have a second verse and then repeat the chorus or just somethign to that effect. Though, either way, this is a good write.
Nice job,
Ashley -
wow
this was really really good i loved this piece it made me think and it sounds great for a song. I liked how this piece has different emotions. I like each verse my favorite line would have to be "Like an angel in the dust
Exposing your wings to the rust" I mean wow i loved this line. That line made me think cause i wanted to know what you meant by it very creative.
Keep writing I know your a great writer. I like all of your poems you write.
Sincerely,
Chandra
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wow
i am a
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*smokingsatan*
skipeople
April 10, 2008
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