Everything
I've ever written has
Faded.
It all just started to fade
Into
what most people call
The
essence of time. Nothing is
Everlasting
Especially when written in pencil. The
Abyss
absorbs all as the lead gets weathered and the paper tears.
Until
the person finds the only thing that can stop it.
The
one thing that can keep their writings alive
Day
in and day out.
I
like to believe that I have
Found
what I needed in order to make
My
sork stop fading, I've finally found a
Pen.
Reviews
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OMG!
That is cool, lol. I noticed it after like the fourth verse. I thinking why you would break it up that way, then I started to think about it. I love your message too, I can only agree!
Anywho, This poem is great, even without the whole hidden message. That was just freakin' creative!
Wonderful job,
Ashley -
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I was lying awake at 1:30 in the morning and I got randomly inspired... so i wrote... the other poem i have on here was one I wrote after this...
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wow
Again this piece blow me away I like how you wrote it. man are you a good writer. This piece was very strong and I got the message in this piece because it is actually th same thing I do when I make a poem. Your message was very powerful in this piece again. Your message was, As you think of your poem you are saying it in your mind but you forget it before you put it on paper, and once you find that pen you forget everything you thought of. once you found that pen you starting writing the things you wanted to express like the emotion into this piece. Very well done . Your very creative, and awesome lol. keep up the great work. love to read more of your poems.
Sincerely your friend,
Chandra
had to since your a great friend you can write great poems.
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Spectacular
Everything faded into the everlasting abyss until the day I found me pen. Beautiful. I think I'll try to attempt one in this style sometime.
skipeople
April 14, 2008