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constellate

street-lamp-lit park bench
forefinger connects the stars
ladle cigar smoke












































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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    April 21, 2008

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    Tight little haikau here Papy..or well if it's not haiku....it's easy to think it is lol

    I love the way a park bench gets lit up at night...what a perfect description in my opinion

    A great little write here Papy



    Cin


    • Papyrus
      April 21, 2008
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      hey thanx, Cindy.

      this is a real event, ya know.

      Pap


      • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
        April 21, 2008
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        A real event??

        Explain more please


        • Papyrus
          April 21, 2008
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          once upon a night in this galaxy...

          well, it's like this: i laid on my back on a bench and looked up at the stars. i saw the big dipper above me and so connected its stars with the pointer finger of my right hand. since i was also smoking a cigarello, i then blew smoke up at the constellation, hence "ladle cigar smoke."

          it was peaceful.

          Pap