Adorned in your stunning silken white robe
You made your flawless imposing appearance
Yet again
The moment my gaze fell on you
I fell in love with you
Yet again
In poise and grandeur
You made your lordly ascend
Yet again
Beholding your treacherously gorgeous form
Took my breath away
Yet again
The glow you radiated
Electrified every atom it pierced through
Yet again
Vulnerable yet powerful, plain yet majestic
I was insanely entrapped in your charm
Yet again
If only I could reach out
I'd hold you close to me
I'd possess you with my entire being
If only I had the authority to
Contradictory to your grand magnifique arrival
You sought a quiet exit, leaving in me this insatiable desire
Yet again
But, the truth hits me, yet again
You belong to the skies
And I, to this mundane place...
We are two worlds apart!
You could never be mine
And I yours...
now .....how is this??
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I can see you have some strong emotions here very well portraied:
If only I could reach out
I'd hold you close to me
I'd possess you with my entire being
If only I had the authority to
Nice...
~ERIKA~
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hi thanks a lot for taking oyur time to read and comment on my poem!
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I really like it
Maybe feel there are too many yet agains..I can see where & why for using them..but maybe towatds the end it started to not work as well, for me. Sorry. But I still did enjoy and like your words, the emotion in them
Cindy
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.
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