The summer breeze still sings the tune
that played when we first met.
Two silly children
holding hands and sharing laughs
as twilight’s shadows danced.
We were stalking after seagulls,
never dreaming we could fail.
Partners in crime,
you and I,
lost in the simplest bond.
The sun did set and no gull was caught,
yet that glowing warmth never died.
It took control,
it filled my heart,
and always kept me by your side.
Now time has passed
and we’ve both changed,
our hands still locked in love.
We’ve shared a lifetime.
We've dreamed a future.
But I’ll never stray beyond that scene.
You and I, always one.
Smiling.
Laughing.
Loving.
Forever chasing seagulls
along our neverending shore.
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Great
Not only very uplifting with a refreshing happy ending (although I'm guilty of writing mostly dark poetry). If only life were really like your poem!. But life is enoughlike it to make me want to stick around. BTW- technically good with good imagery and rhythms. Thaks for thisone.
Rich. Rewarded 6
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How lovely!!! To take young love and keep it still alive is fantastic. I would ask you to marry me but I think you're already a bit busy in that arena, and, thankfully, so am I. :-)
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awsome
great poem,it reminds me of my husband and I.We met when I was 14 and that was 14 years ago....anyway...wonderfully written
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Goin 2 Ashes
April 25, 2008
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