Show me the way you feel,
I want to see you tonight,
Teach me the way you think,
I want to get inside of your mind,
As I lay here,
In this desolate darkness,
Thinking of you,
And your simple smile,
I'll dream of you tonight,
When no one else is there,
It's my little secret,
That no one else would care to hear,
As I lay here,
In this desolate darkness,
Daydreaming of you,
And your warming touch,
Meet me in the trees,
Our not so secret hiding spot,
This is where I'll be,
Under the moon tonight,
And as I wait here,
In this desolate darkness,
Waiting for you,
And your kiss goodnight,
It'll be the thought of you,
That makes me smile.
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It's nice
I like it. Them meaning is clear, duh and it has a pretty good flow. It seems like lyrics to me and with the repeating lines, "and as I wait here in this desolate darkness..." it is like a chorus. Did you mean for it to be a song?
Anywho, nice job.
Ashley -
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thank you for your comment...i reread it and yesh i agree that it sounded more like a song...no it was not meant that way, but yesh it does sound that way
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