his eyes
the only eyes
i seem to be able
to write about
they draw me in
but at the same time
they push me away
they are full of anger
for me
and, i think,
for the world
his eyes
so beautiful
with their tiny
imperfections
so blue
{bluer than the sky
ever thought of being}
more beautiful
than anything i've ever seen
his eyes
they've taken a drastic turn
since that day
{the day that ended it all}
they're mean eyes now
eyes full of rage
for the way
the world has treated him
...
for the way
i've treated him
his eyes
the only thing
i seem able
to write about
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yeah...what she said....this is good....
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thanks, hon
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your welcome
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yay!
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Love it
Great man. Eyes say so much. Hard to interpert at times, then others, so painful with what they're thinking. love it thumbs up !
language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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but, for the record, i am not a man

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