Lust filled.
Hardness delving, finding its bonding.
Sweet sultry honeys flowing as you fill me
neatly, take me completely.
Tempt me into euphoric screams
while leaving gentle marks on neck,
and tongue teasing ablaze trails down
to wanton breast.
Innermost muscles alive I writhe and pant,
scratch my joy on naked flesh. A spell
cast upon me as control you lustfully take.
Senses scream salvation as bodies shudder
orgasm, the glint in your eyes tells me
our endeavour is complete.
Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)
Sorry, you cannot respond to an archived poemReviews
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Kinda paints the picture completely!
Nicely done and does'nt make things too flowery but leaves it nice and raw!. Rewarded 4
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Thank you, I am flattered you enjoyed it
Cindy
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hey cindy
this was hot and by definition erotica, you have to be able to write about things that would make most people blush but you do it well here.
dave. Rewarded 4
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Thanx Dave...I was nervous seeing as its been a while since I really put my head down in re: to erotic writing...But I am pretty darn happy with it too
Thanks for sotpping in, much appreciated
Cindy
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OMG...Give me a minute to get my breath back!
You needn't have worried about returning to erotica - that's a bit like a hawk worrying about flying - you don't just do it, you soar aove all the rest.
How you manage it I don't know, but each erotic poem of yours is fresh; no tackiness, no distaste, just a smooth rawness that leaves me gasping every time. But then, you know how my imagination is...
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Thanks Hubby I was nervous as it had been a while since I buckled down...but wasstill quite happy an dproud of my effort..your praise onyl makes me feel it more
and yes I know ur imagination lol....erotica woudl do it to anyone...But always you
Cin
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Staunton
April 27, 2008