She said that she knew me
While she only looked through me
To the empty parts that echoed
Past the chained heart of my Jekyll
She said she understood
and honestly, I wished she would
But she walked away that day
And the actions are always louder,
than all the words they say...
If she had taken the time
To figure out the depth of my every rhyme
Then she, would have seen
The heart beneath
The feelings I felt
and all that she meant to me
Instead she felt decieved
God, if she had only just belived
But she didn't know
and she didn't see
That it was her
only her
Which I breathed
Author notes
It's about a girl I was with, and I wasn't so " showy" of my affections, so she broke up with me, I have tried to expalin to her, I truley loved, and love her, but, it's like she closes her ears to everything I do
sooooooo....is it 6 on a 1 to 10 scale??
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nice
Time is the greatest healer... -
Its really good
This brought me to tears because it was like the last relationship I was in. I loved him but I had to let him go Wish I would have told him the real truth but I lied to him telling him that I was ok with us ending our relationship but I wasn't Now I regret it but at least we stayed really good friends and thats all I want is to stay in touch with him. Even though he worries me a lot. I will always love him no matter what happens cause I truly care for him.
Anyway I loved your poem it was really great I enjoyed reading it kept up the good work.
Sincerely your friend,
Chandra .C.
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its a 15 on a 1-10 scale
wow, this poem brought tears to my eyes. i understand were your coming from though. Well, great poem.
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this is exactly how my last relationship was....except i broke up with him...but he walked away and didn't come back.....
but the poem is amazing.....
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