I'm so sick of here
way too done with there
it seems like every place I go
I'm just so sick of everywhere
This feeling's in the air
I watch them reach out like they care
But this feeling's in the air
So they better not (fucking)dare
I went home last night
and shaved off all my hair
Stepped out my balconey window
and screamed my pain to this world unfair
And the city lights kept shinning
cars moving in circles
so hypnotising
I almost lost my balance
almost fell
sometimes I wish I did
sometimes I dream of hell
And I don't understand
Why I'm so set for the end
I don't understand
why she left me
with this heart I can't mend
I don't understand
I don't understand
I just click
"suicidal"
and " send"
( music)
I have nothing
I have nothing
but I feel everything
so sick of shufling
and never walking
feeling stuck on a string
I'm so sick of breaking
and never waking from my nightmareish dreams
Cause I have nothing
Always nothing
But I feel EVERYTHING.
Author notes
these are song lyrics. the part on " I just click suicidal send" is like those polls you get. like " how do you feel" and you click suicidal, yep. enjoy
what do you think, too long
Comments
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my favorite part is the
"i just click
"suicidal"
and "send""
yep, that's my favoritre part
but i like the poem...i like the whole darn thing...just those are my favorite lines....yeah....
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i love this poem!...wow so much emotion flows from this poem...the words in themselves flow so rhythmicly....if that's how you spell it....almost in a way...but not totally, if that makes any sense at all....but yesh! i love this poem...good wirte
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Omfg Wow this is awesome!!!!!!!!
This piece is really good I enjoyed it a lot and it really got to me like a bullet in the heart. I felt every emotion you put in that piece. It sounds like my story of wishing I was dead wanting to kill myself would make life more simple but in the end I would lose the ones I love, and that would hurt them to see me go. Even though I want to die so much. I enjoyed your piece and again it is way powerful and I really enjoyed reading it. Your such A great writer buddy. I liked your lines "I just click "suicidal" and " send". Wow This was powerful I wish i could do that. Saying that in your piece brought it to life as if I was the one there feeling the pain standing near the balcony falling ending my life. Loved it. Your really great.
Sincerely Your best friend,
Chandra .C.
xoxoxoxoxo
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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