Shadows dancing.
Shades of aqua paint our impassioned bonding
smooth hands glide over my glistening skin
as button by button, I reveal your body.
In this, secluded spot take your time
teasing every inch of me,
giving life to all my desires.
Embraced, loving me, moving together we connect.
our shadows fervently dance,
we hold tight, reach peaks and fall into one another
with satisfied sighs in this candle-lit cave.
Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)
Sorry, you cannot respond to an archived poemReviews
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Vast improvement, increased visuality, better flow and rhythm to the whole piece. What made you want to re-write it in the first place?
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Thanks Hubby...Just wanted to cause even I thought the origanal was just to short...but had to be that way for the contest, now thats ova etc, jus went back to it
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NotTheDroids
May 6