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Devotion.

The sands of time are sifting.

I’m waiting in all my
exquisiteness.

Under the moon he finds me;
my devotion.

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    May 13
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    the chicki is in the pic is a goddess..cant remember the name dammit lol will see if i can track it down from contest

    I couldnt really keep that feel to it as much as love snuck in lol, but I tried