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Slipping.

Crash, bang!
Car manically spins
beauty now discarded;
ugliest of seas.

Unconsciously slipping
Heavens call,
I say {goodbye} to myself.


Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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    yeah thats the feel i got from it..and then all i needed was a story I suppose..and it came



    Cin