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Rhythmic highest of highs.

I play these strings
dance upon them in a raging desire of fire

‘These notes and bars are
shared, only with you’

We dwell within my music
every stroke, you’re drawn in more.
Not to me,
but my world.

Almost vicious,
my movements in this game
of hypnotizing you with rhythmic;
highest of the highs.
Your smile confirms each note is seeping
deep,
grabbing at your heart.

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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  • dave ochs silver member
    May 14

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    hey cindylicious

    a good job of wedding music and romance/borderline erotica with a nice subtetly. keep us posted on the contests.
    dave

    . Rewarded 4

    • romance and maybe borderline erotica..definetly the sensuality mixed with the music etc...but wedding music..where do u get that from?
      lol

      at some point I might give up writing in notes haha, cause I do so many of the contest..but I do love it..I do love writing

      Love to get you challenged in one of my erotic ones lol

      take care dave

      Cinful