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hmmmmmm

there's nothing to do
When there's nothing to say
And there's nothing worth feeling
when the love falls away
When there's nothing to die for
you have nothing to live for
So what am I surviving for
If only to open the long locked door

hey, it's not done yet

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Reviews


  • skipeople
    May 13, 2008

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    awwwww, nice little ditty! Rhymes well and has flow.

    So true, so true. Love is a nice feeling.
    Ashley


  • Itinerary
    May 14, 2008
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    Finish up bummy

    I like it so far and want to see how you finish it.


  • tjj
    May 16, 2008
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    sounds like every other day though


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 21, 2008

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    heh what a great thought wrapped into so little words..come across so well, and the words flowed through from start to end so well, smoothly

    I like this and I am glad I sotpped in on it



    Cindy