there's nothing to do
When there's nothing to say
And there's nothing worth feeling
when the love falls away
When there's nothing to die for
you have nothing to live for
So what am I surviving for
If only to open the long locked door
hey, it's not done yet
Sorry, you cannot respond to an archived poemReviews
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awwwww, nice little ditty! Rhymes well and has flow.
So true, so true. Love is a nice feeling.
Ashley -
Finish up bummy
I like it so far and want to see how you finish it. -
sounds like every other day though

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heh what a great thought wrapped into so little words..come across so well, and the words flowed through from start to end so well, smoothly
I like this and I am glad I sotpped in on it

Cindy





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May 13, 2008
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