I rust away
in broken skies
as symphonies of
Sparrows and Ravens
clash before my
fading eyes.
A vortex of utter happiness
prances on cloud tops,
teasing me to fall.
I can not move.
I can not speak.
Yet it appears
the whole world is listening.
From free thought
to free form
while everything changes.
It morphs to nothing,
but I can still see it.
Nothing exists.
I feel raindrops
tugging at strands
of curly hair,
dripping from tips
to the blood-splattered
ground below.
Murderous cries break through
to my aching ears.
No finger can block
the sounds of life.
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Is this style okay? Should I continue adding?
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Hecks yes!
lol. I think that this is a really good poem and you should definitely continue. -
Yes!
That's one awesome poem. Seriously. Dark, but amazing. I like how it's structured. It's really interesting.
Kudos!


May 27, 2008
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