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dream

Daring to do that which others consider impossible.

Reach hieghts higher that any have climber before.

Extinguish every fear that eats away you bravery.

Accumilate a heart for adventures and thrills, now!

Make life your game, roll the dice, and move ahead.

Author notes

this poem is very strange. i was doing a freewrite then ended up quitting that so i could write a poem....this is what i came up with.

sorry it's not very good. at least i tried something new. if you can't figure it out, i'll give you a clue....the first letter of each sentence spells out the title of the poem.

just to let you all know, i have never done this before. i love poems that have hidden meanings, so i decided that i would put my lame little skills to the test and try a poem like this.

please tell me what you think....

umm....i dunno what to have you guys answer

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Comments


  • skipeople
    May 31, 2008
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    Haha, I actually kind of like it. It is like a bucketlist, only made by someone else. I think you meant "climbed" in the second line. Anywho, this isn't bad at all. You should like go back and just work on adding stuff. There are a few ideas you'd could conjure from this. I think that if you continue, you'll have something amazing.

    Keep working on it!
    Ashley