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You for the taking.

I asked nicely
 “in the mood to submit?”

   Cheeky lips rose to smile
     as you winked.

      Heated
                  waiting;

                                bound to our table,

                                   desire, our fire;             

                                 you for the taking.

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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  • dave ochs silver member
    May 24

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    hey cindydelicious

    can't say i like the pic. but thats besides the point. i like that your erotica (and pic) is from the female perspective, which is way underrepresnted. cheeky lips rose to smile is a good innuendo, lucky guy.
    dave


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
      May 24
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      hehe..over on ap, heaps thought it was a guy, I noticed instantly it was a girl, wondered how they thought it was a guy lol

      yeh contest being over now, I think I could definetly get this into a lot more then it is..like i said not a huge fan of shorter eoritca but I will still give it a go

      Thanks Dave


      Cindy