Deserted desert.

Desert orange scattered, drifting up, dancing with gravestones. Souls, centuries ago laid to rest human life walking through, respecting the passed, no more. A tumble weed bounces on by. Only the stone today, souls long gone with words that stay on a slab, still very much alive.

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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  Cactus
  May 25
  
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  small and good

  i kiked the tone and style.its visually apeeling too.its comapct and reflective.and written on a topic less dicussed."desert orange scatterd " really a nice phrase.

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    MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 27
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    Thank you for your thoughts, they are appreciated
    
    
    
    Cindy
• LeftTurnsOnly
  May 27
  
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  hi

  I love your screen name. I also like the picture poems that you have done. MM told me to look at your poetry, he said you posted alot of contest stuff and are very productive in your work. Which shows alot. He also said you have a huge heart and will almost always every time leave a comment for somebody after reading their poetry, which I think is great b/c that's one of the many reasons people are here. Well enough about that. I liked the poem alot, i enjoy landscapes and I thought you did this one justice. I liked the scenery and the historic look and feel the poem and picture evoke together.

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    MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 27
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    Aw well I am glad he did and thankful for your time and will indeed return, and enjoy returning, the favour
    
    I have been going through picture inspired period for a while now..we go through stages lol , but none the less it has been still helping me grow as a poet
    
    only hope you enjoy some more of mine, like I yours
    
    Thanks again,
    
    
    Cindy
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  oxymoron270
  June 12
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  great poem, i really like it. and yes, this is a lame and short comment, but i do like the poem.