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Love slipped through my fingers.

 I cried a rainbow,
         forced

            a

       smile and
  spoke drowning blue

        words


  vibrant colours turned into
           blood

            red

         streams,
  echoing azure memories

                                   of vanilla dreams,

                                         and

                                   pastel tinted skies
                                   shadowed in regret
                                      

                                                                whispers of what could be,
                                                                fading into sighs of
                                                                 haunting sorrow...

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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  • oxymoron270
    June 12

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    Like the colors a lot. And the structure. I'm always so boring with my structure. I like how you went from beginning to end, with a hint of it at the beginning.

    Nice One,
    Adie

    • i used to be boring with structure lately I play with it more..sometimes it works heheh ..glad U liked this one
      Thanks Adie


      Cindy