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Forsaken.

Mummy, why did you leave me here?

A precious little girl,
I should be walking down aisles
tossing petals; people admiring me.

Yet I’m locked out
to bitter colds,
                              to be forgotten
                                                            a soul forsaken.

Author notes

35word limit picture inspired contest..i like just came in lol..i cut stuff out too, this is teaching me more and more to get to the point within smaller amounts of words or lines etc..but sometimes it is frustrating lol

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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