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Pool-side affections

Warning, Contains More then sensual adult content, please just know before you read on , other wise enjoy ;)

 

 

Pool waters shimmer in moonlight,

its darkness

framing your breasts

Reaching out my gentle hand

pulling you to heated

tongue and wet zealous lips

 

Our legs lock in ecstasy

breathless in motion

Whispers into my ear

a torturing sensation and desire

ever growing

 

Twisted in translation

our voices in key,

rhythmic moans

I quiver under his touch

Like music to my ears

his pounding thrust,

his every arch,

my every curve is peaking

for his affection

Tranquil waters erupt

In this storm of

heated passion,

lapping at my skin

Tainted desires,

burn in his eyes

 

Quietly,

watching from the waters edge.
Two lovers in flight pleasing,

relishing,
exposing
my body aches for such an embrace
I cannot tear my gaze away
I am bound here, longing

heat is rising

 

Her, face turns

in my direction
eyes lock, she beacons me
I move towards them as if entranced
I want to join, their tango of love
Clothing falls away,

her eyes never leaving my form
he has noticed me now,

both reach out a hand to me
I am longing to be set free
body tingling with pent up desire,

Searching for release
the cool water shocks my body,

my nipples taunt and he softly

caresses them
she puts her hand to my face

drawing me close

 

Lips wet,

Enclose on mine,

tongues entwine

and I am free to let go.


My hands slide beneath the water

touching her soft stomach
the other, feels his hardness

I am overcome with their sweetness,

succulent scents stir my senses

Let me taste,

touch

and smell every inch

of their wanton bodies

 

She reaches for me

her hand finds me hard and ready
you find her

Mouth to nipple,

fingers dipping down,

Searching
finding her very essence,

warm,

wetter than the pool, so slick

My hand to your breast,

her hand pulling,

squeezing,

wanting
I pull her to me,

tongues enmesh as she opens

her lips to me

You open her below,

lips blossoming,

nectar spreading.
My tongue,

your fingers,

both invade this intimate stranger.
Gasping, writhing,

squeezing me

Silently begging for more.

 

Her fingers, inside you,

her thumb brushing your nub
she invades my mouth,

fighting back,

demanding
my fingers on your hard, wet nipple

rolling,

pinching,

caressing;
your back arches, her fingers

and mine go deeper

Reaching,

finding our treasures

 

He enters me with impatience
so intense

my desire,

I erupt within seconds
Fingers lost inside her,

filling all of her

His hardness inside me,

Tongue in her mouth
our bodies entwined

as one entity

 

Suddenly he withdraws
four female hands slide up him

as he finds the pools, edge
My mouth on hers briefly,

hot and eager
then, both our tongues

play to his tune
His hands in our hair,

pulling us to his proud ness,

hands stroke his body,

tongues tease thighs
loud moans escape from this throat
Eyes burning and fixated upon us
we must taste his pleasure,

we are driven by need

 

Both our wet mouths

surround his length,
our tongues

flicking around him,

touching each others

her, back arching as screams

fill the air once more,

and he pulls at hair as his

sweet release with moans,

has arrived….

Um I don't know speak the truth lol :)

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Reviews

  • dave ochs silver member
    May 30

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    hey cindydelicious

    i thought this met all the criteria of erotic poetry-defintely erotic and poetic enuough and stops just short of pornograhic. titallating to say the least, however this might have been a little too long and after awhile i had too struggle to follow who was doing what to whom. of course a three-some is more complex and i wonder if this would be even better in short story form.
    dave