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Whirlwind

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Life is a whirlwind that can seem unending!

Sometimes its like a roller-coaster ride that you want to scream"Let me off"!

Other times its like  an enescapable maze that you leave!

Its even like a path which goes in fifty different directions!

Or an elevator that keeps going up and down!

So much stuff comes at you at once you don't know where to begin!

You wish you could press rewind and start again!

At times there's this haze of fog that gets in the way!

There's times when you feel why do i even bother getting up!

No one cares to understand or love me!

When we should be thankful to see another day!

If we did'nt have trials or tests we would never learn anything!

 

 

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  • dying2live240
    June 2, 2008
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    some lines felt powerful but a few seemed redundant. well done though