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Love is the Moment

Our shadows warmed each other that night,
long ago.



It was so right, but
to their eyes it was wrong.



Time never swallowed that memory,
us watching the stars dance in the sky.



The scent is tranquil in every moment I live,
the secret is motionless in your eyes.



Your love is still weightless over my skin.
It will never die.

Author notes

What could I do better?.... and I don't really like the title. So if there are any suggestions, I'm all ears.

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