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Glass Menagerie

Water splashes on the throttle of the throat,
Spittle leaks from
pointed corners of bleeding mouths,
Straight Jacket.
Let us wrap our arms around ourselves
and stand next to one another.
Gaping, drooping eyes will tell our stories
drool and roll into half-
Let us have this moment.

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  • skipeople
    June 6, 2008
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    Haha, brillant!

    I am most defintley loving this, I must say. If only we could simply wrap ourselves in the comfort of straight jackets and be the true people that we are.

    I am liking your style here, the way to lines are complete and broken at the same time...if that make ANY sense.

    Nicely done,
    Ashley