I think
that this is
goodbye
I can see the lust inside for me dim
I can see it fading from your eyes
I think
that we can do this without a fight
I don't think you care anyway
you didn't even call me last night
I think
that I could just
walk away
I have so many things in my mind
but I still dunno
what to say
I think
I keep thinking
I'll be okay
Keep thinking
tomorrow's just another day
keep thinking
about our week in may
keep thinking
about a sky less grey
Reviews
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This is nice, really. The ending almost seems to have a sense of false hope. Like just the tone I'm getting says that you are trying to convence yourself of these things, rather than you actually believing in them. People can relate to this and that is an important thing, od course!
good job,
Ashley

Perfectly unperfect
July 11, 2008
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