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Aimless

He wept to the sounds of sirens
He knelt before the flashing lights
He thanked the world for violence
And the drama in his life
He walked in different patterns
Too strange to comprehend
But something in his words
Had kept him coming back

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  • nayomie
    June 20, 2008

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    like the rhyme and flow of his piece, is the siren from an ambulence or police??
    It gives the feeling of someone feeling lost.