as everyday goes by,
i try to get strong,
but when i think of you
i don't know what to do.
it just hurts me to be away
from the one i so truly love,
When you hold me close,
I feel warm and safe,
When you kiss me,
It just takes my breath away,
Your constantly running through my mind,
My life seems to get through it,
But when I'm away from you
my heart hurts all the time.
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Short, sweet, and simple. SSS. The meaning is straight forward and lets the reader in on what is going on.
One problem (which isn't that big of a deal), you put "your" when it should be "you're". It's a normal typo, so.
Other than that, it's a nice read.
Ashley
Perfectly unperfect
July 11, 2008
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