Will you always love?
Will you feed me every night?
Yes.
Then I will always love you.
Do you care what I look like?
Will you come and see me every day?
Three times a day; every day
Then No, I don’t care what you look like.
Will you always be by my side?
Will you treat me right?
Oh course.
Then yes, I will always be by your side.
Will you forgive me for my mistakes?
Only if you will forgive me for mine
I will.
Then I will also forgive you.
Will your ever hurt me?
No; as long as you don’t hurt me.
Will we always be friends?
As long as you don’t mistreat me
Will we work together forever?
As long as you take care of me.
Will you fellow me?
As long as you don’t ever put me in harms way
Will you always trust me?
If you give me a reason to trust you
Now let me ask you a question.
Ok
Will you always love me if I’m not that perfect horse?
Yes, as long as you tried your hardest.
I will as long as you do.
I will.
Even if we embarrass our self’s at a show?
At lest we got embarrass together.
Will you still tell me every night that I’m the best horse in the world?
Only if you let me know that you will be waiting for me the next day.
Will you get mad if I don’t do something right?
No; but I might make you do it Intel we get it right.
Now let me tell you this.
I’m here to stay for I’m your horse.
And I’m here to take care of you, for you’re my horse.
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Author notes
This was made when I was sitting with Joe ( horse being used as my back ground) I was wondering weather he really loved me and I statred to think if I could ask him and he could answer. What would he say.
Comments
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This is really cute! See, I knew you could do an animal piece.
It's hard to pull off things like this, but you did well. The ONLY suggestion I have, would be to break it up; let each section have it's own verse.
Example:
Will you always love?
Will you feed me every night?
Yes.
Then I will always love you.
Or something like that, get what I mean? I think that would add effect. Anywho, this is a great write adn I nice read.
Keep it up,
Ashley -
Very cute
I really enjoyed this, being a horse person myself. It was very sweet and honest,I feel my horse would answer the same way. However towards the ends you have "our self's" and it should be ourselves.language: 3, rhythm: 1, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.
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