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New Day..

i began a new day
a new day like others
and we call it a new day...
like leaves on trees
all same
no difference
but in the name
everything done is the same
no stories to tell
nothing to feel
nothing to believe
no chance to find a change
no talks
no tears
all bald
all same
and again all same
like the cells in a person
but without a change
how could we call it a new day?
but wait..
there is a cell in me
preparing to change
as everybody else will
let the cell divide
fight more
let the (same)be few
and watch what will you do
recharge
rediscover
rewill
rethink
refound
re-everything
and the wind will ring
with a melody of the new world
that you will live in
if you change..
that was what i realized
in a hesitation
when i found no change..
then..
you will see the black colours
the bird a piano
the world from adifferent point
at that time..
a NEW DAY will begin..

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  • disneygirl
    July 6, 2008
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    hey everybody on sharepoetry..u r from the talented of the world people and i wish from you to comment on me because iam still young and i wishh that u like my 2 poems..
    thxxxxxxxxx..

  • Grateful
    July 28, 2008

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    starting lines are as good as the ending lines...i really enjoyed this...so many wonderful lines...you certainly have the talent to write poetry...all the very best to you..