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all smiles

dear manager
i liked your enthusiasm
and always up beat attitude
in front of me
and high fives often
until my back was turned
oh i know
you gossip trash through teeth gaps
and groan
till your throat hurts
about everything i'm doing wrong
but never gave me the slightest clue
until my mid summer eval
which you presented me
in that same faux positivity
to say that i suck

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  • lvin4him247
    July 11

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    I liked this poem very much. I can actually relate to this, after having a similar experience in a place where i used to work. I loved how you wrote it a letter-y sorta fashion, it made it funny in a sense and all i have to say is very nicely done.


    • Papyrus
      July 11
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      hey, thanx. it's been a rough day, fo sho.

      best,

      Pap