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Clatter

Intricate patterns

Unique to express

Following in matters

Indelible confess

Some of ponderance

Others beguiled

Unlocking continuance

A truth may be reviled

Utter and slander

Exposed from disguise

Tempered meander

Destined surprise

 

copyright 2008 vduna

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  • purple esprit silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    Our all life and character is a pattern and there are different materials, various fabrics. Sometimes it appears grey or unpleasant black but we can make some golden glimmer run through the whole pattern which makes it always something special. The positive outlook of yours is showing like a red thread through all your poems and I really admire this. Thanks! Ulla xx