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Dear Tomorrow..................

Dear tomorrow
Please forget me
Dear Tomorrow
Can you hear me?

You seem so far away...........

( short guitar rift)

I'm writting to tell you
I'm not coming
Because I'm here tonight
Watching red blood.......running.....



And pain has never felt more comforting........

( 2nd riff )


So Dear Tomorrow
Do not grieve me
Dear Tomorrow
You must belive me
That in dying here tonight
I've never been more happy
In my whole life.....

( 3rd Riff )

You use to be
my only hope
and gulibull I stood here
Standing
Reaching
Out........
for your irreachable rope




( more will be added later)

Author notes

It's....about beliveing tomoorow will be better...your whole life...living for tomorrow constanly only to relize.....tomorow is just a dream, beacuse once you reach it....you're in today....and today....is what you're trying to escape from....

it's really not so comlicated.

 

 

 

 

This song has two melodys. It was written to a Placebo song's melody.( Without you I'm Nothing)

 

and It can be addapted to others...

 

It's a very slow song

 

It's not punk...it's just...........depressing

I wrote this at 3:00 in the morning. I was having a really hard night, I feel asleep before I finished it, I'll finnish it tonight.

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Comments


  • DrkAngel
    September 9, 2008
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    I love this one to, I so understand it, its good


  • skipeople
    September 5, 2008
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    Aww, sounds like the kind of song you listen to after a bad day, the kind that lets you know you're not the only one who feels like crap. Like me...now, ha. The only thing I don't completely understand in the last line, teehee.

    Other than that, great job, can't wait for the rest!

    Ash

  • Woodstock
    August 21, 2008
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    I dunno man, dark. But I like how you made it into a kind of declaration to tomorrow instead of the past and why your doing it...you just are doing it and it's what you want. I like the concept of telling tomorrow not to wait up, original. Not very provocative though- make me believe it.