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04/08/08

With guilt-wash away brew flowing freely down my gullet,
a fresh question lingers, indeed answered:
To do with, purpose defeated is stars persistently named.
No-one nor star belongs but in this multiverse, unbound.
Doubts taught the truth...

Shame on all. Knowingly you yet cry?
Tears blotch the starlight.
Shame your tears too!
Clumsy underhandedness binds with love!
What happened!

By me, right now

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by Exoskeletal

On August 23, 2008

© Fil Niculescu, All rights reserved

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