Never seen static, so erratic
Patterns of dismay, inducing the *play
Transfixed on illusions, breeding confusion.
Carving my eyes into fallacies
Beating my body with fantasies
Sealed in my trust never should have been lust
Around the circle back to the start,
Nothing around but mine torn apart.
I dont want to wake up from this fairy tale
Still we cant commit
Still I cant omit
Fucking why cant I admit
WHY do I give a shit?
Transcended into black
Failure to wind the clock back
only leads to regrets
Never seen panic, so ecstatic
Breathing out only leads to breathing back in
To all the people who consider this fuckin sin
Forget to bow down before you fucking kneel
god down on your shoulder with his fuckin heel
i may be an atheist
but I'm not to be confused with a theist
i wish that i could commit deicide
too bad god has already died
I've got just one question for you
what has god done for you
does he put food on your plate
along with invent greed, animosity and hate
fuck your fantasies intertwined fallacies
so sad to see you see me as an enemy
too bad for you I'm the one who's free
your the one with your wrist nailed in a tree
Failure to recognize obscurity will make your insanity
become a reality for the rest of humanity
get a grip on your sanity before I end your life fantasy
I'm not sure where my mind was at, do you know?
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fantastic pace, the rythm of this poem shows an energetic anger that complements the contents. have you listened to the song "letter from god to man" by Dan le Sac (an english poet)? similar theme, different structure.
the image of deiside having already been achieved is very powerful, especially considering you don@t view yourself as a "theist"- it is no philosophy, simply fact.
very good
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thanks man
I have not listened to that song, but I appreciate the comment. You look so much like one of my friends its insane, I thought you were him at first haha.
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August 27, 2008