To love is to be warm
To hate is to be cold
If I have love I have God
If I have hate then I am dead
To love is knowledge
To hate is ignorance
If I love I understand
If I hate I am a fool
To love is to feel
To hate is to be numb
If I love I have a heart
If I hate I am a stone
To love me or hate me
That is your choice
I choose to love
Because that is my choice
General feelings about the poem
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To Love or To Hate...
this poem? I don't have a choice! I love it! The messag you convey is excellent. I really like all the ways you describe the defferences between being filled with or giving love and verses being filled with hate. I the ending because it is our choice. Great Poem!
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Brian thank you for your comments they are very much appreciated.
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the repitition is awesome! i use that technique also! very easy-going and flows nicely!
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Thank you Grace for kind remarks.
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hey Robin
i liked the lay-out and the simplicity, however as for the content i think its too black and white, the good guys wear the white hats and bad guys wear black hats. people love and hate, like a love/hate relatshonship, more like a shade of gray.
dave
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