Nothing ever made me happy
Until he came along
He knew my weakness
And my strengths
I only had one weakness, though...
Bite Me
He loves biting things
So it worked out well for us
But when it ended
I was never happy
Nothing ever made me happy again
No one else knows my weakness..
And no one ever will
Reviews
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Those are often the best.
I do my best writing by listening to that little voice and writing down whatever he's whispering. This is both humorous and enticing. The title sure grabs ones attention. Poor girl, It's a shame she can't find another vampire to do what she needs to make her happy.
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i've been there my friend, just got out of a similar relationship
i love those poems that come out of nowhere; just raw thoughts and feelings written down
but i hope this (vampire?) doesn't close herself off too much- that image is very powerful
very nice
dcp
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Comments...
thanks...
And no, she's not really a vamp, not yet anyway...lol. thanks for the comment though
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September 22, 2008
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