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Coal Set Alight

Glory fills my soul,
God's mercy and forgiveness,
The flame for my coal.

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  • Lake Absence
    October 20, 2008

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    I've become...

    Quite put out with haikus. They don't leave enough space for you to fill you're complete brilliance in. Perhaps a collection of haikus would satisfy my hunger of your amazing words? =]

  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    September 22, 2008

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    Elaborate.

    Tell us More. Tell us Why. Tell us How. Tell us how it makes you feel. This could be a fantastic poem.


    • tirwander
      September 22, 2008
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      ok :-) that is a haiku so i figured it was as long as it could be in that state