Flesh that was once warm and so alive
Now cold and void of life
Eyes that saw the world
Now empty, sees the world no more
A heart that pumped life, now still
They say that all life has to end, why?
You were a part of my childhood
Behind me in our growth
We would play and explore together
And fight as siblings do
But the anger was short lived
They say there is a place beyond death, why?
I never really understood you
You found love and joy in all things
Where I could only see anger and hate
You saw a world of beauty and grace
I could only see darkness and despair
They say only the good die young, why?
This world caused you pain and grief
Tried to destroy all the good you had
Sadly at times I was a part of that world
But you always understood ... forgave
Your world was one of goodness and simplicity
Whilst ours was dark and grotesque
They say there is a time for all things, why?
Author notes
This poem is for my sister who died on the second day of the new millenium - 2 January 2000.
General comments welcome
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Some losses never seem to lessen.
It sounds like this person was a twin to you somehow, a complement, lived out things you did not. That must make it doubly hard to lose them.
This reminds me of my own losses, and speaks to them accurately and simply. Nicely done and effective? Indeed. Best RA -
Why indeed
A great question well posed. I am sorry for your loss. She sounds like one of those beacon people who guide the rest of us chumps toward the light. Great read. Thank you for posting.
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 3, form: 4.
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I'm sorry for your loss.
This is a wonderful tribute to your sister. I can tell she loved life and probably lived life to the fullest. It is not always easy to have joy and see happiness when you are surrounded by darkness. Your sister must have been a very special person.
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beautiful, touching
Very well written. I found this very touching and it made me really feel for you and your loss. I know it's been years but I am sorry. This dedication to your sister has reached her somehow. I'm sure of it :-) Keep writtin!
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