"So, what breaks you silly man,"
He asked the humbled clerk.
The will of such a meager soul,
should surely slip when jerked.
The clerk replied with honest smile,
my defiances is a perk.
He turned his head and swore a loft,
"This day's been such a quirk."
"So, what breaks you silly man,"
repeated he who lurked.
The clerk replied with eager grin,
"Your taunting will not work."
Quite aback was lurker taken,
his mood then flipped berserk.
"So, I break you silly man,"
His face had since been murked.
"You'll get more flies with honey,"
replied he with a smirk.
"So, nothing breaks you silly man,"
"Is this some kind of cirque?"
"I'll call your boss I know the man,"
"I'll have your ass declerked."
The clerk looked up and softly said,
"Then please eschew my shirk."
Author notes
I wrote this about some of my employees and how customers might feel about them =D
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Freaking Hilarious:))
Totally Awesome
, I So relate to this , ffs i like this one 
. well done 
funny,
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Fun!! I can totally relate to the many customers I had to deal with, from retail, to really any job where you are trying to make customers happy in a world where no one wants to be happy.
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Well done.
I like the rhythm and rhyme of this poem. As you know that's my general type of poem. This has a cute story. Reminds me of my days behind the counter as a cashier. I had certain customers that were always in a bad mood. More than once I was cussed at. I would smile and say have a great day I'll see you next time.
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Fun
I enjoy your ability to stick with the rhyme throughout the entire poem. Fun use of words I don't often hear! Bravo! :-P
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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haha! that's how i feel sometimes at Certain places. really funny!
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