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Mess


My life is a mess,
I just feel like screaming,
I wanna wake up and know that I'm dreaming,
I'm trapped in a nightmare,
Feel lost in the dark,
I have no more faith,
I'm falling apart,
I try to stay strong,
Can't take it much longer,
I feel so alone and the pain just grows stronger.

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  • oxymoron270
    October 24, 2008

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    totally commiserate with you on these feelings... lately i'm a mess as well. i totally feel everything in here right now. but it won't stay like this forever.