she's our bitch we share her she likes it no doubt we know because she makes such pleasing noises when we take her out and screw her if you knew her you'd want to screw her too she's a fighter Japanese a little boxer with a big heart we have the keys to it she always starts we always finish we made her what she is today pulled her heart apart stripped her bare put her on a diet got her fit did it with loving care then built her up again and when the time came we took out what we'd put in again and again and again sun wind or rain we abuse her but we buy her nice shoes so we don't lose her we handle her well she talks to us she tells when we're pushing too hard she doesn't complain much she likes when we're inside her riding her clutch at least that's what we think she drinks but it's us that get high and what the hell most girls like her do but very few are as loved or as reliable as our little Subaru. |
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My best friend and I own a scabby-looking Subaru Impreza Wagon which we've stripped out and prepared for the race track. This loveable lady takes the most unbelievable abuse and never complains. She has a 'boxer' flat four turbo engine and her 'shoes' are Yokohama part-used race slicks! Because we built her and she never lets us down we do, truly, love this kick-ass little car.
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Not a bad piece
I dissagree with him about the title. I like beeing misslead. You have a great way with words. Keep up the great work.
language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 2, form: 4.
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Ochs is ALWAYS wrong!
Hey Enoq. I reckon professor Ochs was taking the piss here ever so slightly - but it's generally a good idea to disagree with anything he says. Thanks for the nice comment. >W<
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hey john
i finally caught on and realized that you werent' talking about a woman that you gang-banged but a vechile. definetely in you style, only thing I'd change is the title, which sends the reader down the wrong track.
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Puns intended - but I'm serious too!
Hey Professor. I'll assume that 'wrong track' remark is a pun and that you had no trouble 'getting' this. It's almost impossible to discuss it now without pun or double-entendre, so just let me say it may be tongue-in-cheek yet it is actually a fairly heartfelt eulogy to one tough little bitch of a car which me and my friend abuse regularly and royally at the local race-track. Just back from yet another caning session for this unfortunate four-wheeled steed, I was moved to voice my passion and admiration for her. Things that work truly well and punch above their weight and their price-tag always impress me. But more than anything it seems, we love the things that we invest our own time and energies in. We 'built' this car ourselves so we're maybe more proud of her achievements than we should be. I know, it's a boys and their toys type thing. Thanks for reading and commenting as always. >W<
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