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The Power of Laughing

I can make a person's day
I can wipe the tears away
Anyone who starts to frown
Will find their grimace
turned upside down.

The power of laughing
can do many a thing,
and turns the winter
into spring.

Beware the power of laughing -
for none is as infectous
As I.

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  • Enoq
    October 11, 2008
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    Succint

    I like it a lot. Gets the point across in a melodic way. Short yet astute. Good post =D

    language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 3.


    • ACpoetry
      October 11, 2008
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      Sigh

      Yeah. Go laughing! Thanks for the applause

  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    October 9, 2008
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    Cute

    But way to dark for me. Ha Ha Ha...