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Ginger

Gracious, caring and kind

Intelligent, such a sharp mind

Nice as could be to people like me

Gorgeous, pretty as ever if you ask me

Exciting and fun when she laughs at me

Really wish I could make her see

GINGER your friendship means so much to me.

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A gift for a special friend who is an even more special person.

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  • ACpoetry
    October 18, 2008

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    Yay! Ginger needed a poem!
    As usual, (no offense) you have some typos.
    "freind" is spelled "friend".
    "Nce" is spelled "Nice".
    Other than that, yay Ginger!

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      October 18, 2008
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      As usual no offense taken.

      However I don't know what you're talking about there are no such typos in my poem...Now anyway. Thanks. Since it was around one in the morning I'm not too surprised I had a couple. Thanks again and yes Ginger deserves a poem.


  • gingerhall1976 silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    AWWWW Brian....

    This means the world to me! your friendship too, means more than you know. You were the first person I met here and you have consistently been kind, and caring, yet {constructive}...lol...you know what I mean. I consider you a very good friend and I am so thankful that I could be a "G" in your garden! Luv ya!

    my favorite line was

    Gracious, caring and kind

    Intelligent, such a sharp mind

    Nice as could be to people like me

    Gorgeous, pretty as ever if you ask me

    Exciting and fun when she laughs at me

    Really wish I could make her see

    GINGER your friendship means so much to me.

    hey, how could I choose?

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      October 18, 2008

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      I'm so glad you like it.

      You deserve to have poetry written about you. You are a wonderful person. I may have to make you the topic of more poetry in the future. I like the favorite line you picked, it's the best one after all. Since I am {constructive} I will point out that you need to revise your comment because it has typos. That's what you get for copying off of a guy like me. You're supposed to copy off of the smart kids silly. Put one of these thingys : after my favorite line was: Here are the typos: {N ce} = {Nice} {freindship} = {friendship}. Since AC pointed them out and I fixed them people might not realized you copied it and pasted it below. Unless they were paying attention and noticed you spelled friend correctly on your own. That's what you get for copying. I thrilled to have planted you in my Poetry Garden. Now it's much prettier here! Luv YOU Too.


      • gingerhall1976 silver member
        October 18, 2008
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        lol

        done and done...I noticed them last night but I loved it just the way it was, so I said nothing...off to fix them now. Thanks again mister!

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